Option One:
Consider the ways in which the main characters are
similar. Based strictly on these two
stories, formulate a description of protagonists in neo-noir.
In the stories The Kidnapper Bell and The City of Commerce, the two main characters are Jim and Nick. The one thing that comes up in my mind that makes them similar is probably the neglect they have with their wives. For Jim, we didn't even know he had a wife until the last page. I was pretty shocked considering he was planning to have an affair and probably even had more in the past. Nick didn't have an affair that we know of but he neglected his wife by letting her go off to these parties not caring what she did and who she did, Nick also had an obvious gambling issue and ignored her demands by going off to the casino.
Based strictly on these two stories, I would think that neo-noir can occasionally be told in a third person point of view. In The kidnapper Bell, the story was told by an unknown third party which is different since protagonists are usually in first person. By this, we had information about the characters in the story. Just that Jim was married and that was really it. The only thing that bothered me about the two stories were the endings. Kidnapper Bell was very attention grabbing and I was excited to read on about who the kidnapper is and why he did this to her sister. If Jim got caught, and what happened to the bodies? The City of Commerce also had a vague ending. Is Nick just going to live his life on the run? Did the mob get to his wife? Based on both of the stories, I would think that neo-noir has really vague and non-closure endings, which I really don't like.
Assignment 2:
I would have to say that "The Girl Who Kissed Barnaby Jones" is the story that depicts noir the most. It has Tate, who is the typical middle aged man or older who works as a waiter (dead end job) divorced and seemingly bored in his life with no excitement who is lured by a beautiful femme fatale, Cherie. Cherie is a typical femme fatale who is also a washed up actress "She came from L.A from East Lansing Michigan to be an actress back in the 70's (Phillips, 288.) The only difference is that he is not gullible enough to help her with the murder and goes against her right away. And like most protagonists, Tate is ultimately murdered by Cherie.
The least noir story would have to be "What You See". Gabe is too much of a low life. Most protagonists are boring in noir, but they at least have some charm in them. Gabe on the other hand just met Terrel and all of a sudden envisioned a detailed next few encounters with her and even asked Marcus over to meet her. Even his jokes with Marcus were lame. Just an all out lame guy. I don't even really see any features of a noir story in here besides the descriptions of streets in L.A. Gabe is crazy, maybe he's the "Male fatale" maybe we just read the inside of a fatales mind for the first time. He didn't really seduce her nor does he seem attractive, but he definitely lured her into his car and ultimately ended her life. This story was just really pathetic, it was hard to read how awkward he was. So all in all, not a noir story at all.
Hi Stacey, I liked your thoughts on the first assignment. I agree, both characters were very neglectful of their wives. I also found a similarity in that both charachters were kind of twisted, or had a problem in their own ways. Jim from "The Kidnapper Bell" was sick, I thought. He was willing to drug this girl to sleep with her, then we find out he is married. Disgusting. And Nick has a severe gambling/pot addiction and cares more about that than his own marriage. I liked your blog!
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ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your perspective. I really didn’t care for the super vague endings either. And when you find out Jim is having an affair with his wife, it almost makes you wish something else would happen to him; not just him going to bed in some other guys cloths. That was my thought at least haha.
I also agree that the easiest to classify as noir was “The Girl Who Kissed Barnaby Jones”. I really enjoyed that one. It was an easier, more interesting read. I found myself laughing throughout with the whole story. I also found myself feeling more sympathetic towards Tate, similar to Walter in Double Indemnity.
Good job!
First off, you did a really nice job on your blog, you said everything I was thinking. With assignment one, Id also have to agree with you on the fact that i did not like the endings at all really good story line and got you really going and then the end left me so damn confused like with the Kidnapper Bell it makes me wonder if he was the one in the end to tie her up and was the murderer all along and set some random guy up to make him look as if he did it all, I didnt like it. And I also agree with you on assignment two as well. The Girl Who Kissed Barnaby Jones really reminded me of Double Indemnity in a way and What You See was just a weird and awkward story that just seemed like the writer had no idea where he wanted to go with the story. Overall great job on your blog!!
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